听薛老师讲作文系列四 扣题是最大的亮点

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一篇作文最大的亮点是什么?也许有人说是文采,你看那些运用排比句,连续几个比喻,架势拉得很大的作文往往能受到阅卷老师的好评。是的,优美而富有表现力的词语是你语文素养的体现,一篇好的作文离不开好的词语,但如果仅仅靠华美词语的堆叠,内容空洞无物,那么,这些词语就好像无所附丽的羽毛,随风而逝,不会给人任何好感。也许有人说是结构、是技巧、是书写……当然这些都很重要,但首要的却不是这些。一篇作文最大的亮点是扣题。 What is the biggest bright spot in an essay? Some people may say that it is a literary grace. If you look at those essays that use parallels and several metaphors in a row, you will often get the praise of a marking teacher. Yes, beautiful and expressive words are your embodiment of Chinese literacy. A good essay is inseparable from good words. However, if you just rely on the stack of Chinese and American words and the content is empty and empty, then these words are like nothing With the feathers, the wind dies, will not give any favor. Some people may say that structure, skill, writing ... Of course, these are important, but not the first of these. The biggest highlight of a composition is the deduction.
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