散文要写得“形散神凝”,就得学会“聚焦”。所谓“聚焦”,就是选择一人、一事、一景、一物作为’焦点”,用以凝聚散乱的题材。如果我们将所写的题材聚焦于一物,这个物就成了叙事或抒情的中心,所有的材料都向它辐凑过来,这种手法就叫“物脉”。我们学过的散文,如冰心的《一只木屐》、茅盾的《白杨礼赞》、巴金 If you want to write the essay “Shameless Condensation”, you must learn to “focus.” The so-called “focusing” means choosing one person, one event, one scene, and one thing as the “focus” to aggregate the scattered topics. If we focus on the subject we write, it becomes the center of narrative or lyricism. , all the materials are radiating to it, this method is called “the vein.” The essays we’ve learned, such as Bingxin’s “A Muddy”, Mao Dun’s “Albuquerque”, and Ba Jin