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世界是多彩的,未来也是多彩的。每一位小读者都在为自己编织着不同的梦:有人想成为科学家、工程师,有人则想成为文学家、艺术家。然而不管怎么样,你总要能用一支笔来画出自己心中最美最亮的图画。2004年我们请来了复旦大学中文系二年级的邵筱芳大姐姐为大家讲评作文,2005年我们请来了复旦大学材料物理系三年级的大哥哥赵政廷为大家讲评作文。我想,他们的讲评一定会给小读者们实实在在的帮助。赵政廷大哥哥是位理科大学生,但他从小就热爱阅读和写作,在初中时便在《新民晚报》《解放日报》《家庭教育报》上发表过文章,高考时语文取得了119分的高分,还曾自编过作文集《浅草》。可见无论学文学理,写作,对一个人的成长至关重要。让我们看一看,作为一名理科大学生,他是怎样评论我们的作文的。——编者
The world is colorful and the future is colorful. Every little reader is weaving a different dream for himself: some want to be a scientist, an engineer, some want to be a writer, an artist. However, no matter what, you can always use a pen to draw the most beautiful and brightest picture in your heart. In 2004, we invited Shao Xiaofang, a sophomore in Chinese department of Fudan University, to comment on the essay. In 2005, we invited Zhao Junting, a third-grade brother of Department of Materials Physics of Fudan University, to give an essay on the essay. I think their comments will surely help young readers. Zhao Zhengting’s eldest brother is a science undergraduates, but he grew up reading and writing since he was an early age, and published articles in Xinmin Evening News, Jiefang Daily and Family Education Daily in his junior high school. , Has also authored essays “Asakusa.” Can be seen regardless of academic literature, writing, a person’s growth is crucial. Let us take a look at how he, as a science college student, commented on our composition. --editor