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2016年,我参加了湖北孝感市中考语文试题的命制工作,负责命制现代文阅读题。现代文阅读题所选的文章要体现时代性、文化味、生活气、新鲜度。要选出同时符合这四点的文章有一定的难度,我翻看了一批最新的报刊后,最终选定了一篇有关留守儿童的叙事性散文。这篇散文原题为《一辈子的幸福》,我读后发现文本仅最后一段有点牵强地上升到“一辈子的幸福”这个高度,文章的主旨是通过叙述哥哥用自己的手掌给弟弟传递清凉,来表现哥哥对弟弟的关爱。我索性将文章最后一段删去,又
In 2016, I took part in the compilation of the Chinese language test in Xiaogan City, Hubei Province, and ordered the reading of modern Chinese readings. Articles selected for modern reading should embody the times, culture, life, freshness. There was a certain degree of difficulty in choosing an article that met all four of these points at the same time. After reading the latest papers, I eventually selected a narrative essay on left-behind children. The original essay entitled “a lifetime of happiness,” I read the text found only the last paragraph of a little far-fetched rose to “life’s happiness,” the height of the article’s purpose is to describe his brother through his palm to his brother passed cool , To show brother’s brother’s love. I simply deleted the last paragraph of the article, again