“报纸上的消息枯燥无味!”广大读者对此早有议论。几番改革(?)报纸上可读性强的好消息仍不多见。但是,当我一口气读完消息《古城长沙草木葱茏引来丽鸟鸣春》(《科技晚报》1987年4月18日)后爱不释手,一读再读。它象一篇优美的散文,展现出一幅隽美的丽鸟山水画,,给人以美的享受。新华社转发了通稿.《人民日报》海外版、中央电台、香港《大公报》、《明报》、《信报》均加以采用。它并荣获全国晚报系列“我爱中华、绿化城市”征文一等奖,全国科技报系列好新闻一等奖。它美在哪里呢? 一、内容美,给读者展现了一幅富有动感的主体图画。它是一则经验性消息,报道先进城市长沙的绿化,经验性消息最容易写的模式化,站在领导的角度列出一二三四。而 “News on the newspaper boring!” The majority of readers have talked about this long ago. Several Times of Reform (?) Good news for the newspapers is still rare. However, when I finished reading the news, “Ancient City of Changsha verdant vermilion” (“Technology Evening Paper” April 18, 1987), put it down and read again. It is like a beautiful essay, showing a handsome beauty of the birds landscape paintings, giving the United States to enjoy. Xinhua News Agency transmitted the draft. “People’s Daily” overseas edition, China Central Television, Hong Kong “Ta Kung Pao,” “Ming Pao Daily News,” “letter” are used. It won the National Evening News series “I love China, green city” essay first prize, the National Science and Technology News series of good news first prize. Where is it beautiful? First, the content of the United States, to the reader to show a dynamic picture of the main body. It is an empirical news report on the afforestation of the advanced city of Changsha and empirical information is the easiest way to write patterns, and from the point of view of leadership, it lists 1234. and