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在写作辅导中,好多教师在审题、构思、选材等方面苦下功夫,这固然没错,但批阅作文时,发现有些作文批阅还是“头痛”得进行不下去,于是简简单单写道:“你的作文短,而且干巴巴。”“中心不突出,内容不具体,语句不通顺。”“作文纯粹是记流水账。”……一连串冰冷的评语用鲜红的字写出,句句劈头盖脸砸向学生的心灵。试想,这样的评语,学生看后会有怎样的感觉?不但扼杀了学生习作的兴趣,而且让学生逐渐失去对看评语的兴趣,久而久之,
In writing counseling, many teachers have taken pains in examining questions, designing ideas, selecting materials, etc. This is true. However, when we read the essay, we found that some essay comparisons or “headache” have not been carried forward. Therefore, we simply wrote : “Your composition is short and dry. ” “Center is not prominent, the content is not specific, the statement is not fluent. ” “Composition is purely recorded account. ” ... ... a series of cold comments with bright red words Write out, sentences sentenced to cover the students pound face. Imagine such comments, students will feel how they look? Not only stifled interest in student work, but also allow students to gradually lose interest in watching reviews, over time,