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句子是文章的基本框架，在文章中起着桥梁的作用，所以要写好作文，首先应该从写好句子开始，好的英语句子能够生动、形象、准确地表达作文内容。平时训练时，对于提纲式作文，如果考生能把一篇作文的要点运用多种句式造句，不断锻炼灵活造句能力，然后运用这些句子组段成篇，写起作文来就会得心应手。运用多种句式进行的造句训练有助于考生在考试时写出较高级词汇和较复杂句式，从而在英语写作中获得高分。
例如，2002年高考全国卷英语作文中有一个要点：“如收门票，需建大门，围墙，会影响城市形象”。我们就可以运用多种句式造出符合要求的句子：
1. If entrance fees are charged, it will be necessary to build gates and walls, which will affect the appearance of the city.
2. A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn’t help the image of the city.
3. If the park charges entrance fees, gates and walls are needed. This, of course, will influence the look of the city.
4. With entrance fees charged, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of the city.
5. If there are entrance fees, it will do no good to the image of the city because walls and gates will have to be built.
在多种句式造句过程中，学生可以运用以前所积累的词汇、句型、语法知识，强迫自己去正向迁移，将所学知识融入自己的写作之中，从而达到学以致用的目的，同时，也有利于考生复习和巩固所学知识。
为了说明多种句式造句训练在英语写作中的应用，我们以2010年全国卷（II）英语作文为例，对多种句式造句训练的方法加以说明，希望通过这种练习形式，让考生能够更直接地体会提纲式作文的多种句式造句法，并在以后的训练中加以运用。
真题再现：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书，你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1、教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。
2、授课对象：高中生(至少三年英语基础)。
3、工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)。
本试题要点包括：1、招聘之事（开首句）；2、教授课程；3、授课对象；4、工作量；5、恰当的结尾。如果把要点3分为两个具体要点，本作文实际有六个要点。请根据下面括号中的提示词汇，完成下列各个句子，并注意体会多种句式造句在本写作试题中的应用（请参考每个作文提纲要点后的答案）。
要点1：招聘信息
(1) A native English teacher ___________ （需要）in our school.
(2) Our school is looking for a native speaker to ____________（教授英语课） to senior high
school students.
(3) Our school is ________（急需）a native English speaker__________________（能够在我教授英语课）.
(4) I have some good news for you that __________________（我校将聘请一名外教）.（用同位语从句）
参考答案：
(1) is wanted或is needed; (2) teach some English courses; (3) in great need/demand of; who can teach some courses to the students in our school; (4) our school will employ a foreign teacher；
要点2：教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。
(1) The courses you will teach ______ （包括）Oral English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
(2) You can _______________________（选择任何一门课程）: Oral English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
(3) There are several English courses you can choose to teach, ______（即/如）, Oral English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
(4) Several English courses __________（提供） here, including Spoken English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
参考答案：
(1) include; (2) choose/teach any three of the following courses; (3) namely/including/such as; (4) are offered.
要点3：授课对象：高中生(至少三年英语基础)
(1) You will give lessons to some senior school students who _______________________（至少三年英语基础）.
(2) ___________________（已经学了三年英语）, the students have built some foundation in English.（分词作状语）
(3) The students _____________________（已经具备一定的基础） in English after 3 or more years of study in senior school.
(4) As for the senior students you teach, you don’t have to be worried, for ______________________________（他们已经打下了良好的基础） in English learning in the past three or more years.（for引导的原因状语从句）
参考答案：
(1) have learned English for at least 3 years或have more than 3-year experience in learning English 或have more than 3 years of experiences in English learning; (2) Having learned English for over 3 years; (3) have developed some basic skills或have some basic English knowledge /skills; (4) they have laid a good foundation
要点4：工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课
(1) ____________________（作为英语老师）, you will have 12 classes per week, and you can choose three courses from the four mentioned above. （分词作状语）
(2) If you work here, you _________________________（需要上12节课）each week...
(3) For each week, you will have to _____________（每周上12节课）
(4) _________________ （你的工作量不大）as you work only 12 hours a week to give lessons to the students here...
参考答案：
(1) Being /As an English teacher; (2) will be required to give 12 periods of class; (3) teach 12 hours a week或give students 12 weekly classes; (4) Your workload is not so heavy
要点5：担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问
(1) Besides teaching/Apart from teaching, you’ll also _____________（担任）an advisor to our students’ club or our school’s English newspaper.
(2) You’ll also have to _____________ an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.（用take构成的短语）
(3) You’ll also __________ an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.（用play构成的短语）
(4) _____________________ （担任顾问）is also part of the teaching job as you’ll have to help with the work in our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
参考答案：
(1) work as /act as /serve as; (2) take the position of; (3) play the role of ; (4) Being an advisor
要点6：结束语
(1) _________________（全面考虑）, you’re the right person to take the position /job.
(2) In my opinion, you are ______________ （最合适）for the job. If you’re interested, please let me know. I’d be more than ready/happy to help.
(3) Personally, ___________________ （应该是个好主意）to take the position /chance. I believe you will be suitable for the job. Please reply to me as soon as possible.
(4) _____________（依我看）, as a potential candidate, you will be the right person to __________（满足要求） of the job. I do hope you can take the chance. And I’m waiting for your response /reply.
参考答案：
(1) Taking everything into consideration/account; (2) the very person for或the best person for或suitable for或perfect for或fit for; (3) it should be a good idea for you; (4) From my perspective ( of view)或Personally或In my opinion；meet the requirements
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例如，2002年高考全国卷英语作文中有一个要点：“如收门票，需建大门，围墙，会影响城市形象”。我们就可以运用多种句式造出符合要求的句子：
1. If entrance fees are charged, it will be necessary to build gates and walls, which will affect the appearance of the city.
2. A wall and a gate have to be built if there is an entrance fee, which doesn’t help the image of the city.
3. If the park charges entrance fees, gates and walls are needed. This, of course, will influence the look of the city.
4. With entrance fees charged, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of the city.
5. If there are entrance fees, it will do no good to the image of the city because walls and gates will have to be built.
在多种句式造句过程中，学生可以运用以前所积累的词汇、句型、语法知识，强迫自己去正向迁移，将所学知识融入自己的写作之中，从而达到学以致用的目的，同时，也有利于考生复习和巩固所学知识。
为了说明多种句式造句训练在英语写作中的应用，我们以2010年全国卷（II）英语作文为例，对多种句式造句训练的方法加以说明，希望通过这种练习形式，让考生能够更直接地体会提纲式作文的多种句式造句法，并在以后的训练中加以运用。
真题再现：假如你是李华，你的美国笔友Peter 曾表示希望来中国教书，你校现需招聘外教，请给他写封信，告知招聘信息。内容主要包括：
1、教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。
2、授课对象：高中生(至少三年英语基础)。
3、工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课；担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问(advisor)。
本试题要点包括：1、招聘之事（开首句）；2、教授课程；3、授课对象；4、工作量；5、恰当的结尾。如果把要点3分为两个具体要点，本作文实际有六个要点。请根据下面括号中的提示词汇，完成下列各个句子，并注意体会多种句式造句在本写作试题中的应用（请参考每个作文提纲要点后的答案）。
要点1：招聘信息
(1) A native English teacher ___________ （需要）in our school.
(2) Our school is looking for a native speaker to ____________（教授英语课） to senior high
school students.
(3) Our school is ________（急需）a native English speaker__________________（能够在我教授英语课）.
(4) I have some good news for you that __________________（我校将聘请一名外教）.（用同位语从句）
参考答案：
(1) is wanted或is needed; (2) teach some English courses; (3) in great need/demand of; who can teach some courses to the students in our school; (4) our school will employ a foreign teacher；
要点2：教授课程：英语口语、英语写作、今日美国、今日英国等。
(1) The courses you will teach ______ （包括）Oral English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
(2) You can _______________________（选择任何一门课程）: Oral English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
(3) There are several English courses you can choose to teach, ______（即/如）, Oral English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
(4) Several English courses __________（提供） here, including Spoken English, English Writing, America Today and Britain Today.
参考答案：
(1) include; (2) choose/teach any three of the following courses; (3) namely/including/such as; (4) are offered.
要点3：授课对象：高中生(至少三年英语基础)
(1) You will give lessons to some senior school students who _______________________（至少三年英语基础）.
(2) ___________________（已经学了三年英语）, the students have built some foundation in English.（分词作状语）
(3) The students _____________________（已经具备一定的基础） in English after 3 or more years of study in senior school.
(4) As for the senior students you teach, you don’t have to be worried, for ______________________________（他们已经打下了良好的基础） in English learning in the past three or more years.（for引导的原因状语从句）
参考答案：
(1) have learned English for at least 3 years或have more than 3-year experience in learning English 或have more than 3 years of experiences in English learning; (2) Having learned English for over 3 years; (3) have developed some basic skills或have some basic English knowledge /skills; (4) they have laid a good foundation
要点4：工作量：每周12学时，任选三门课
(1) ____________________（作为英语老师）, you will have 12 classes per week, and you can choose three courses from the four mentioned above. （分词作状语）
(2) If you work here, you _________________________（需要上12节课）each week...
(3) For each week, you will have to _____________（每周上12节课）
(4) _________________ （你的工作量不大）as you work only 12 hours a week to give lessons to the students here...
参考答案：
(1) Being /As an English teacher; (2) will be required to give 12 periods of class; (3) teach 12 hours a week或give students 12 weekly classes; (4) Your workload is not so heavy
要点5：担任学生英语俱乐部或英语校报顾问
(1) Besides teaching/Apart from teaching, you’ll also _____________（担任）an advisor to our students’ club or our school’s English newspaper.
(2) You’ll also have to _____________ an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.（用take构成的短语）
(3) You’ll also __________ an advisor to our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.（用play构成的短语）
(4) _____________________ （担任顾问）is also part of the teaching job as you’ll have to help with the work in our students’ English club or our school’s English newspaper.
参考答案：
(1) work as /act as /serve as; (2) take the position of; (3) play the role of ; (4) Being an advisor
要点6：结束语
(1) _________________（全面考虑）, you’re the right person to take the position /job.
(2) In my opinion, you are ______________ （最合适）for the job. If you’re interested, please let me know. I’d be more than ready/happy to help.
(3) Personally, ___________________ （应该是个好主意）to take the position /chance. I believe you will be suitable for the job. Please reply to me as soon as possible.
(4) _____________（依我看）, as a potential candidate, you will be the right person to __________（满足要求） of the job. I do hope you can take the chance. And I’m waiting for your response /reply.
参考答案：
(1) Taking everything into consideration/account; (2) the very person for或the best person for或suitable for或perfect for或fit for; (3) it should be a good idea for you; (4) From my perspective ( of view)或Personally或In my opinion；meet the requirements
责任编辑 张丹凤