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【摘要】写作在英语教学和考试中起着举足轻重的作用。笔者通过批阅大量学生作文发现：高三学生作文中最容易出现的错误。本文列举20种最常见情况，旨在帮助广大高三师生纠正同类错误，提高写作能力。
【关键词】透视错误、提高能力
一、There be句型（学生作文中出错率最高的句型之一）
There are many students use smart phones 改为：There are many students using smart phones / There are many students who（that） use smart phones.
二、系动词与实意动词混用
He is study English .改为：He is studying English /He studies English.
I am worry about it .改为：I am worried about it / I worry about it .
三、分不清动词及物不及物（及物动词后加介词或不及物动词直接带宾语）
Last week I attended on a birthday party 改为：Last week I attended a birthday party.
Students should not chat others when at class.改为：Students should not chat with others when at class.
四、代词误用（分不清人称代词主宾格与物主代词）
I gave he a book 改为：I gave him a book .
They should protect them eyes.改为：They should protect their eyes.
五、成分缺失（无主语或缺谓语）
If work hard ，we will be successful.改为：If we work hard，we will be successful.
He often helps us when we in trouble.改为：He often helps us when we are in trouble .
六、词性误用（名词与动词、介词与动词、形容词与副词混淆）
Have an affect on 改为：Have an effect on
He often gets up at 6；00 everyday 改为：He often gets up at 6；00 every day.
She like her mother very much （她很像她妈妈） 改为：She is like her mother very much （她很像她妈妈）/ She looks like her mother very much.
七、分不清可数不可数名词，无名词单复数意识
Many student like playing games 改为：Many students like playing games.
I have many works to do 改为：I have much work to do .
八、汉语式表达
I think have two reasons （我想有两个原因）改为：I think there are two reasons .
Recently our village has taken place great changes.改为：Recently great changes have taken place in our village .
九、冠词误用
To begin with 误写成To the begin with，lead a happy life写成lead happy life.
十、人称不一致，指代不清楚
If you study hard， we will make great progress .改为：If you study hard ，you will make great progress.
十一、审题不严，闹出笑话
题目提示语：假如你是李华，……然而有考生作文中写到：I’m Wang Lin .
十二、拼写错误
Besides （而且）误写成beside，nowadays写成nowdays
十三、分不清to是介词还是动词不定式符号
He decided to going to school 改为：He decided to go to school.
He devoted himself to do his work 改为：He devoted himself to doing his work.
十四、句意矛盾或重复累赘
He managed to pass the exam，but failed 改为He tried to pass the exam，but failed
In my opinion，I think the owner is justified to do so.改为：In my opinion，the owner is justified to do so./ I think the owner is justified to do so. 十五、主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误
A farmer lead us to the field 改为：A farmer led us to the field.
All the students like books that was written by LuXun.改为：All the students like books that were written by LuXun.
十六、时态错误
When he came back he found that his wife has gone to bed改为：When he came back ， he found that his wife had gone to bed
What is he doing this time yesterday ？ 改为：What was he doing this time yesterday ？
十七、介词误用
In my surprise，he didn’t pass the exam改为To my surprise， he didn’tpass the exam.
Don’t read under the sun 改为：Don’t read in the sun
十八、结构错误
While riding a bike，keep the right of the road.改为：While riding a bike，we should keep the right of the road.
He wrote about 300 stories，some of them had been translated into Chinese.改为：He wrote about 300 stories，some of which had been translated into Chinese.
十九、语序错误
Only in this way， we can learn English well.改为：Only in this way ， can we learn English well.
二十、非谓语动词错误
Watch TV too much is bad for your health.改为：Watching TV too much is bad for your health.
参考文献：
[1]郭在贻.放流”就是“放浪”吗[J].社会科学辑刊.1981（4）.
[2]田长贵.高等学校双杠教材教法研究[J].湖北民族学院学报（哲学社会科学版）.1982（1）.
[3]陈国正.简析logm5.4 [4]朱定符.求几何极值问题的错误简析[J].数学教学.1982（4）.
[5]赵东邱，学方华，信先吉.重积分计算的常见错误多元函数求导和[J].中国远程教育.1983（1）.
[6]尹鑫妹，王典伦.书写分子式常见错误种种及纠正[J].江西教育.1983（5）.
【关键词】透视错误、提高能力
一、There be句型（学生作文中出错率最高的句型之一）
There are many students use smart phones 改为：There are many students using smart phones / There are many students who（that） use smart phones.
二、系动词与实意动词混用
He is study English .改为：He is studying English /He studies English.
I am worry about it .改为：I am worried about it / I worry about it .
三、分不清动词及物不及物（及物动词后加介词或不及物动词直接带宾语）
Last week I attended on a birthday party 改为：Last week I attended a birthday party.
Students should not chat others when at class.改为：Students should not chat with others when at class.
四、代词误用（分不清人称代词主宾格与物主代词）
I gave he a book 改为：I gave him a book .
They should protect them eyes.改为：They should protect their eyes.
五、成分缺失（无主语或缺谓语）
If work hard ，we will be successful.改为：If we work hard，we will be successful.
He often helps us when we in trouble.改为：He often helps us when we are in trouble .
六、词性误用（名词与动词、介词与动词、形容词与副词混淆）
Have an affect on 改为：Have an effect on
He often gets up at 6；00 everyday 改为：He often gets up at 6；00 every day.
She like her mother very much （她很像她妈妈） 改为：She is like her mother very much （她很像她妈妈）/ She looks like her mother very much.
七、分不清可数不可数名词，无名词单复数意识
Many student like playing games 改为：Many students like playing games.
I have many works to do 改为：I have much work to do .
八、汉语式表达
I think have two reasons （我想有两个原因）改为：I think there are two reasons .
Recently our village has taken place great changes.改为：Recently great changes have taken place in our village .
九、冠词误用
To begin with 误写成To the begin with，lead a happy life写成lead happy life.
十、人称不一致，指代不清楚
If you study hard， we will make great progress .改为：If you study hard ，you will make great progress.
十一、审题不严，闹出笑话
题目提示语：假如你是李华，……然而有考生作文中写到：I’m Wang Lin .
十二、拼写错误
Besides （而且）误写成beside，nowadays写成nowdays
十三、分不清to是介词还是动词不定式符号
He decided to going to school 改为：He decided to go to school.
He devoted himself to do his work 改为：He devoted himself to doing his work.
十四、句意矛盾或重复累赘
He managed to pass the exam，but failed 改为He tried to pass the exam，but failed
In my opinion，I think the owner is justified to do so.改为：In my opinion，the owner is justified to do so./ I think the owner is justified to do so. 十五、主谓不一致，尤其是单数第三人称作主语时，谓语的单复数形式出现错误
A farmer lead us to the field 改为：A farmer led us to the field.
All the students like books that was written by LuXun.改为：All the students like books that were written by LuXun.
十六、时态错误
When he came back he found that his wife has gone to bed改为：When he came back ， he found that his wife had gone to bed
What is he doing this time yesterday ？ 改为：What was he doing this time yesterday ？
十七、介词误用
In my surprise，he didn’t pass the exam改为To my surprise， he didn’tpass the exam.
Don’t read under the sun 改为：Don’t read in the sun
十八、结构错误
While riding a bike，keep the right of the road.改为：While riding a bike，we should keep the right of the road.
He wrote about 300 stories，some of them had been translated into Chinese.改为：He wrote about 300 stories，some of which had been translated into Chinese.
十九、语序错误
Only in this way， we can learn English well.改为：Only in this way ， can we learn English well.
二十、非谓语动词错误
Watch TV too much is bad for your health.改为：Watching TV too much is bad for your health.
参考文献：
[1]郭在贻.放流”就是“放浪”吗[J].社会科学辑刊.1981（4）.
[2]田长贵.高等学校双杠教材教法研究[J].湖北民族学院学报（哲学社会科学版）.1982（1）.
[3]陈国正.简析logm5.4
[5]赵东邱，学方华，信先吉.重积分计算的常见错误多元函数求导和[J].中国远程教育.1983（1）.
[6]尹鑫妹，王典伦.书写分子式常见错误种种及纠正[J].江西教育.1983（5）.