游记有三个要素:游踪、风貌、观感。以游踪为线索。写游记要写清楚游览的经过,以游踪为线,串联起自己的所见、所闻、所感。如柳宗元《小石潭记》用“从小丘西行百二十步”“伐竹取道”“潭西南而望”“坐潭上”“乃记之而去”等语句表明自己不避幽远、探山访水的踪迹。李健吾《雨中登泰山》将登山路线交代得清清楚楚:岱宗坊→虎山水库(虬在湾) There are three elements of travel: travel, style, perception. Take the trail as a clue. Write a travel plan to write a clear tour of the journey to the line, from the series of what they saw, heard and felt. Such as Liu Zongyuan’s “Little Shitan in mind” with “From the hilly westbound one hundred and twenty steps”“The cut bamboo ”“The southwest side of the lake”“”Tantan“”Remembering it “ Statements and other statements indicate that they do not avoid secluded trails and visits to the mountains. Li Jianwu’s ”Mount Deng Tai in the Rain" clearly explained the mountaineering route: Zong Zongfang → Hushan Reservoir (Zhaoyinwan)