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我们常常苦恼于学生作文中的空话、套话,将此定性为没有真见解,无深刻思考,这当然是对的,但有时又觉得对中学生提出严格要求,愿望虽好,可往往达不到预期效果。求“深刻”固然可以努力,但别忘了学生作文还有个好的品质可以培养——情趣,即使不深刻,但无论是对一个理论的阐发还是对一种生活的思索,都能够有情有趣地呈现出来,同样会是优秀的作文。试看下列两文及其分析。例文一:
It is certainly true that we are often distressed by empty words and stereotypes in the composition of a student and characterize this as having no real opinion and no profound thinking. However, sometimes we feel that our desire for high school students is often unsatisfactory because of our aspiration. effect. Seeking “deep ” can work hard, but do not forget the student’s composition still has a good quality can cultivate - fun, even if not profound, but whether it is a theoretical elucidation or thinking of a life, can Appearing amorous and interesting, the same will be excellent composition. Try the following two articles and their analysis. Example one: