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同学们在记叙文写作时,通常容易出现这样一些问题:人物描写概念化,故事叙述简单化,对稍微复杂些的事物,更是含糊笼统,无法用准确生动的文字复述。加上生活阅历比较少,课外阅读不够多,又不善于观察体验,因此,记叙文写作很不理想。拙劣的文笔,梗概性的叙述,让本该摇曳多姿跌宕起伏的故事情节,像一段粗砺的直木那样缺乏美感。
When writing narratives, students are often prone to such problems as the conceptualization of characters, the simplification of narratives, the vagueness and omission of accurate and vivid texts. Coupled with less life experience, extracurricular reading is not enough, not good at observing the experience, therefore, the narrative writing is not ideal. The clumsy writing and the synoptic narration make the story of ups and downs that should have swayed like a lack of beauty like rough rough wood.