每当作文本发到学生的手中时,他们就立即打开,迫不及待地看看老师的评语,再看看自己获得的等第;此时,有人见了老师的批改显得喜气洋洋,有人则垂头丧气。可见,教师的批改对学生的影响重大,不恰当的批改可能打击学生的信心,让学生失去写作的兴趣;反之,则能激发学生的写作热情,能写出更多更好的文章,进而促进学生多方面的发展。所以,在平时的作文教学中,我 Whenever the texts were sent to the students, they immediately opened and could not wait to see the teacher’s comments and look at the rankings they had received. At this time, some people saw the approval of the teachers seem beaming, while others dejected. It can be seen that teachers’ revisions have a great impact on the students. Improper revisions may hinder students’ confidence and make students lose interest in writing. On the contrary, they can stimulate students’ writing enthusiasm, write more and better articles, and then promote Students in many aspects of development. Therefore, in the usual writing teaching, I