临帖靠帖再上台阶戴贤德先生的隶书,书写时心态平静,用笔放松,笔画温润平和,无剑拔弩张之气。正文布局字疏行紧,整体合度。以下三点不足,望能改进。一、临帖不够,笔画单调。特别是隶书标致性的笔画——波画、捺画,写得不厚重、不突出、不到位。二、字体偏高,缺少横向张力, Pro posts by posts and then on the steps of Mr. Dai Xiande’s official script, when writing calm state, with a pen to relax, gentle temperament strokes, no rattling gas. Text layout sparse tight, the overall degree of integration. The following three deficiencies, hope to improve. First, temporary posts not enough, monotonous strokes. In particular, the scripture of the Peugeot strokes - wave painting, suppression of painting, writing is not heavy, not prominent, not in place. Second, the font is high, the lack of horizontal tension,