《在炮兵阵地上》记叙了彭德怀同志深入东海前哨炮兵阵地检查备战情况的事,反映了彭总对工作认真负责,对同志坦诚相待,勇于批评与自我批评的高贵品质。文章以彭总的感情变化:“不满——发火——压火——谈心”这条主线和团长的感情变化:“想 On the artillery position, Comrade Peng Dehuai's account of the in-depth preparations for the inspection of the artillery positions in the East China Sea reflects the noble qualities of Peng, who takes a serious and responsible attitude toward the work and gives his comrades frank treatment, courage in criticism and self-criticism. The article changes the overall feelings of Peng: “Discontented - angry - crushing - talking heart” the main line and head of the feelings of change: "think