笔者多年参加中、高考改卷工作,很为多数作文中的刚健、质朴、诚实、鲜明的文风而高兴,但也为不少学生在作文中反映出来的不良文风而担忧,现分类简陈于后,以期引起注意。一、装腔作势,架子十足。几乎每一次改卷都能遇到这些话头:“看到这样的作文题,我掩卷深思,再三再四,心潮澎湃……”“看到这则料材,我想,写什么内容好呢?想呀想呀,想起来了。”在紧张的考场上,且不说“掩卷深思”不可能, The author participated in many years, college entrance examination to change the volume of work, very majority of composition for the healthy, simple, honest and distinctive style of writing and happy, but also for many students in the composition reflects the bad style and worry about the current classification Jane After, in order to attract attention. First, posed, full shelf. Almost every time I change the volume can encounter these words: “to see such a essay questions, I conceal myself, repeated again and again, surging ...” “See this material, I think, what to write good Think about it, think of it. ”In a tight examination room, not to mention“ concealment impossible ”