一篇好的文章,除立意新颖,构思巧妙外,语言生动形象也是必不可少的要素。孔了曰:“言之无文,行而不远”。而中考考场上很多考生作文,大量存在着语言贫乏苍白,枯燥淡味,缺乏感染力的毛病,然而,怎样才能使自己的语言有文采呢?我认为,教给学生让作文语言靓丽起来的方法,才能使他们的语言表达真正进入美妙的境界。一、善于运用修辞手法精美的文章多用修辞,高明的作家无不是善用修辞的能手。朱自清先生的《绿》一文中就用了二十多个比喻。用比喻拟人,可以使干瘪的语言生动、形象起来。例如:①小山上有了小屋,使山有了生气,有了情 A good article, in addition to novelty, clever ideas, vivid language is also an essential element. Hole said: “no words, line and not far ”. However, many candidates in the examination room essay, there is a lot of language pale, boring light, the lack of contagious problems, however, how to make their own language Wenqu? I think, to teach students how to make writing beautiful language approach, In order to make their language truly enter the wonderful realm. First, good at using rhetorical devices Exquisite article with rhetoric, clever writer is not good at using rhetoric experts. Mr. Zhu Ziqing’s “Green” article uses more than 20 metaphors. Use analogy personification, you can make dry language vivid, image up. For example: ① There are huts on the hill, make the mountain angry, with love