“我们作文,要写出诚实的、自己的话。”教育家叶圣陶在《作文论》中如是说。“思想健康”和“感情真挚”相辅相成,相得益彰,同为文章的灵魂。“高考作文评分标准”将“感情真挚”列为基础等级的第一等。“感情真挚”是在“感情真实”基础上的升华,是指在文章中表达的对社会、人生发自内心的真实、恳切、自然的感情,并非人云亦云,更不是无病呻吟。但是现在的高中生在写作抒情的时候,大都存在几个常 “We write essays, to write honest, own words. ” Educator Ye Shengtao in “essay theory” says. “Thought health ” and “sincere feelings ” complement each other, complement each other, with the soul of the article. “College entrance essay grading standards ” “sincere feelings ” as the basic level of the first and so on. “Feelings of Sincere Love ” is a sublimation based on “True Feelings ”, which refers to the true, sincere and natural feelings expressed in the article from the heart of society and life. But nowadays, high school students mostly have several times when writing lyricism