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每次批阅学生的作文,一读到那些矫揉造作、内容空洞、语言苍白的作文,心里就愁得不得了。我很困惑,那些在生活中活蹦乱跳、话语灵动的小屁孩儿,怎么一写起作文来,就老气横秋、装模作样了呢?最近教《爸爸的花儿落了》,发现文中有一段描写父亲下班回家给花浇水的文字,写得极好。爸爸推到脑后的草帽、手里抱着的弟弟,嘴里哼着的歌儿,爸爸插在瘦鸡妹妹头上的茉莉花儿,陈伯的打趣儿,院里吹着的凉爽的风,每一个细节,都深深地打动着我。
Every time I read a student’s essay, I feel unhappy when I read those essays that are artificial, empty in content and pale in language. I am very confused, those who live in life, clever words kid actor, how to write a composition to be old-fashioned, pretend it? Recently taught “Papa’s flowers fall,” found in the article there is a description of his father back from get off work Home to water the text, write very well. Father pushed behind the straw hat, his brother in his hand, his mouth humming children, father inserted in the thin chicken sister’s jasmine flowers, Chen Bo’s quips, the hospital blowing cool wind, Every detail, deeply touched me.