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《梅雨潭》一文选自朱自清的《绿》。课文以游踪为线索,先后以“山边”、“亭边”为观察点,勾画出梅雨潭的外貌,瀑布的气势,水花的活泼可爱,给读者留下准确、鲜明而又完整的形象。课文一开头写梅雨潭瀑布,就是由远及近地变化观察点,写出了对瀑布的不同印象。作者先描写山边所见瀑布远景:“走到山边,便听见哗哗哗的声音。抬起头,镶在两条湿湿的黑边几里,一带白而发亮的水便呈现在眼前了。”这里对瀑布的声音和概貌的描写,使读者对梅雨潭有一个总体印象。接着,作者交换观察点,描写在亭边看到的近景:“那瀑布从上面冲下,仿佛已被扯成大小的几绺儿,不再是幅整
“Mei Yu Tan,” a text from Zhu Ziqing “green.” Text to the trail as a trail, has to “mountain”, “pavilion edge” as the observation point, outline the appearance of the Meiyuantan, waterfall momentum, lively and lovely, leaving readers with accurate, clear and complete image . The beginning of the text to write Meiyuantan waterfall, is far and near changes in observation point, wrote a different impression of the waterfall. The author first describes the waterfall on the edge of the mountain: “When I reach the hillside, I hear the sound of my wailing sound.” I looked up and set it in two wet, dark black edges, Here. “The description of the waterfall sounds and profiles, so that readers have an overall impression of Meiyuantan. Next, the author exchanged observations and described the close-ups seen at the edge of the pavilion: ”The waterfall rushed down from above, as if it had been torn into pieces of size,