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纵观今年我省考生的作文试卷,好作文不乏其例,但差作文数量不少,尤其是三类下和四类上的档次(22—30分),比例更大。其特点是:前后不同一,中心不集中,议论不一致,行文不严密。从逻辑角度讲,是违反了同一律。主要表现为:1.开首戴顶帽子。把提供的材料抄进开头,或开头与题目简单地挂一挂钩,接下的正文就离开中心,空谈社会现象。
Looking at the essay test papers of our province’s candidates this year, there are many examples of good essays, but the number of poor essays is quite large, especially the grades on the three categories and the four categories (22-30). Its characteristics are: different from before and after, the center is not concentrated, there is inconsistency in discussion, and the writing is not strict. From a logical point of view, it is a violation of the same law. Mainly as follows: 1. Open the top hat. Copy the provided material into the beginning, or simply link the beginning with the title. The next text leaves the center and talks about social phenomena.