开学后不久,某学校团委在网站挂出一封倡议书,呼吁全校师生为即将到来的植树节做贡献。作为青年组织的团委,利用植树节这个契机,在广大师生中宣扬爱绿护绿,并希望大家行动起来,能为学校的绿化活动做贡献,其出发点无疑是值得赞赏的。然而,就这封倡议书来看,在撰写上存在着一些问题。一般认为,倡议书是个人或集体提出或发起,以完成某项任务或开展某项公益活动为目 Shortly after the start of school, a school youth league committee posted a proposal on the website urging teachers and students in the school to make contributions to the upcoming Arbor Day. As a Youth League Youth League, the Arbor Day is the turning point for promoting green love among teachers and students and hopes that everyone can contribute to the greening activities of the school. Its starting point is undoubtedly worthy of praise. However, judging from this proposal, there are some problems in composing. It is generally believed that a proposal is made or initiated by an individual or a group in order to accomplish a certain task or conduct a public welfare activity