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点评人:刘涟高三作者在开篇用一句感叹道出了其所咏之物,又在紧扣标题的同时,给读者设下了悬念。丽江雪山脚下由原住居民的孩子采下来编织而成花环的黄蕊花,同时也象征着孩子们如雪山之上晶莹透彻的白雪般纯洁的心灵。那儿的孩子是多么纯洁而善良啊!当他们用小手从口袋中摸出一叠叠用辛苦劳动换来的钱互相平摊时,竟无丝毫犹豫和遮掩。作者借“雪山之花”此题,来抒发对如此纯净心灵的赞美和感激。
Commentary: Liu Lian senior III author in the opening sentence exclaimed that the things they chant, but also closely linked to the title, set the suspense for the reader. At the foot of the Lijiang Snow Mountain, aboriginal children weave and weave the petunia flower, which symbolizes the snow-white, pure heart of the children like snow-capped mountains. How innocent and kind-hearted the children there were! Without hesitation and cover-up when they pulled their pockets out of their pockets and laid flat with each other for hard work. The author borrows the title of “Flower of Snow Mountain” to express praise and gratitude to such a pure soul.