写景物,要给人身临其境的感觉。这一点说起来简单,但做到却不容易。大多数同学常犯的毛病,就是观察流于空泛。一描写春天,就是“春光明媚,百花齐放,鸟语花香”等等,但是,春光如何明媚,百花齐放是什么样子,鸟语究竟是什么声响,花香又是哪般味道,他们却往往说不出来,而读者就更不会从习作中感觉到了。 Write scenery, to give people the feeling of immersive. This is easy to say, but not easy to do. Most college students often make mistakes, that is, the observation is vague. A description of spring, is “bright spring, flowers bloom, birds of paradise” and so on, but how bright spring, flowers bloom is what, what is the sound of birds, flowers and what is the taste, but they often can not tell, and readers I'm even less aware of my work.