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一篇文章,构思巧妙,立意深远,但是如果没有文采,也只能“有如一个面貌丑陋而心灵却伟大的女人,可以对她敬仰,但要喜欢她是不可能的。”作文在追求文章内容深度的基础上,还应在文章的语言上精心“包装”。那么,怎样才能通过有效训练,提高作文语言的文采?我们不妨从以下两个方面展开。一、加强扩句训练在教学中,可以通过让学生互批作文来进行扩句训练。先要求他们找出同学作文中平淡无味的句
An article, cleverly designed, far-reaching conception, but if there is no literary talent, only “like an ugly appearance but great woman, can respect her, but to like her is impossible.” “ The content of the article is based on the depth of the article should also be carefully language ”package ". So, how can we improve the essay writing style through effective training? We may wish to start from the following two aspects. First, to strengthen the expansion sentence training In teaching, you can make students expand the sentence by training essay. First ask them to find out the dull and tasteless sentences in classmates’ writing