许多学生作文,无论写景状物,还是写人叙事,照葫芦画瓢,线条化,平面化,以致文章呆板,缺少灵气,如同影像模糊的黑白照片。究其原因,是作文中仅仅把感觉器官——眼、耳、口、鼻等收集到的信息,简单直接地记录下来的缘故。其实,作文(某些应用文,如某些说明文等除外)并非纯客观意义上的如实记录,而是带有自我心灵体验(心灵 Many student essays, whether writing scenery, or writing narratives, according to gourd painting, line, flatten, so that the article dull, lack of Aura, as the blurred images of black and white. The reason is that in the essay, only the information collected by sensory organs - the eyes, ears, mouth, nose and the like, is simply and directly recorded. In fact, essays (except for certain application texts, except for some explanatory texts) are not truthful records of truth but self-soul experiences