一排灯火通明的窗子正对着阁楼照耀着,工厂正用它强大的铁肺进行工作,不断发出轰隆隆的巨响。铁器的哗啦声,锤头敲打的叮当声,锯齿拉扯时的咯咯声,以及熔软了的金属尖头被敲打时的吱吱声交响成一片。煤烟现在是直冲九霄,喷吐着火焰,向四方撒下一束束的火花,恰如点着了的花爆。(节选自柯诺普尼茨卡《烟》)[赏析]本段从听觉的角度入笔,巧妙地运用拟声词,如轰隆隆、哗啦声、叮当声、咯咯声、吱吱声等,写出了工厂繁忙、枯燥的工作场景。正所谓“忙 A row of brightly lit windows shone brightly against the attic, and the factory was working with its powerful iron lungs, constantly ranting loudly. Iron clattering, hammering clattering, jerking when sawing teeth pulled, and squeaking sound when melted metal tips were struck. Soot is now straight into the sky Jiuxiao, spray the flame, to the Quartet sow a bouquet of sparks, just as the lit flower explosion. (Excerpt from KONOPUNZKA ”Smoke“) [Appreciation] This paragraph from the perspective of hearing into the pen, clever use of onomatopoeia, such as rumbling, crashes, jingle, cackle, squeak and so on, write Out of the factory busy, boring work scene. So-called ”busy