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【中考真题】在你的生活中,你曾遇到过怎样的眼神?那留在你记忆深处的眼神,又曾怎样长久地拨动着你的心弦?请以“遥远的眼神”为题写一篇文章。要求:①将题目抄在答题卡上;②除诗歌、剧本以外文体不限;③不要少于600字;④文中不要出现(或暗示)本人的姓名、校名。(2013年江苏省苏州市中考语文卷)【失误原文】遥远的眼神苏州一考生晚风吹过河面上最后一波涟漪,夕阳收起它最后一抹余晖,秋霜目送去最后一只归雁。我们默默地站着,目光游离在那若即若离的记忆之门上。当秋叶开始落地时,我们起码可以这样说:“别伤心,我已体验过那种感觉了。”(开头一段的晚景描写虽简洁而生动,但情思的
What kind of eyes have you ever met in your life? That stay in your eyes deep in the memory, but also how long struck your heart? Please “distant eyes” Write an essay for the title. Requirements: ① the title copied on the answer sheet; ② poems, scripts other than style; ③ not less than 600 words; ④ text should not appear (or implied) my name, school name. (2013 Suzhou City, Jiangsu language test paper) [eyesight] distant eyes Suzhou a candidate breeze blowing the last wave of ripples on the river, the sunset put away its last touch afire, autumn frost to send the last one go wild goose. We stood silently, his eyes free to wander the door of memory. When the autumn leaves begin to fall, we can say at least: “Do not be sad, I have experienced that feeling.” (The first paragraph of the evening scene description is concise and vivid, but the emotional